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13 August 2008 @ 11:43 am
Smut poem [ONE-SHOT]  
Title: Smut poem
Author: meh
Genre: smut
Paring: JaeHo / YunJae
Length: One-shot
Sumamry: It's just a smut poem.

I feel your hot breath in my ear,
your hands roaming my chest.
Your sweet lips are moving down,
lingering at my neck.

Your hands are moving too,
as slow as they may be.
I want you to go faster,
I try to make you see.

I cannot find any oxygen,
My brain cannot think.
Your hands and lips, though beautiful,
are pushing me toward the brink.

I need you so badly now,
more than I ever thought I could.
I'd do anything for you.
I can promise you I would.

Your hands are moving closer,
closer to what I need.
I need to feel you inside of me.
If only I could plea.

But I have no air to breath,
so it's impossible to even speak.
I wrap my arms around you,
and become hypnotized by the sensations you leave.

My hands travel to your hair,
and tug lightly at the strands.
I want to kiss your lips.
Then I concentrate on the feel of your hands.

They are still slowly moving south.
You are driving me insane.
I know you are teasing me.
To you this is a game.

Then I feel a sudden warmth,
your tounge at my belly.
This makes me crave you more,
and my whole body feels like jelly.

The warmth run's along my waistline,
as you lick your way down.
Your hand is warm on my hip,
and for some reason I feel like there's something i've found.

I feel your hot breath,
it's surrounding my most sentative part.
I hear something pounding, 
and i realize it's my fast beating heart.

Everything goes completely black,
when you engulf my length.
It feels so amazing,
but it's impossible to think.

I pull at your hair,
and I hope I'm not hurting you.
But I can't contol myself,
so there's nothing I can do.

I try to hold still,
but my body's shaking like mad.
My hands move to claw the bed sheets.
This is the best feeling i've ever had.

We go on like that for a while.
We're going at too slow a pace.
Suddenly you come up,
and I finally see your face.

You smile at me, cheekily,
then come up to kiss my lips.
Then forcefully you lift me up,
controling me by my hips.

Slowly you set me down,
onto your waiting length.
I burrow my face in your neck,
as together we are linked.

I didn't know it would hurt this much.
I didn't know there would be so much pain.
But it starts to feel better,
and the pleasure begins to gain.

I look up at your face,
and you kiss my lips again.
I tell you to move faster.
I don't know how this is a sin.

It feels more than amazing,
having you inside of me.
Stars start to blur my vision,
and I can no longer see.

But that doesn't matter,
because the feeling matters most.
All the feelings that you give me,
even when your not close.

Just when I am thnking of you,
my heart will beat so fast.
I know something for sure.
Our love can surley last.

Then suddenly it's over.
You pull out and lay beside me.
I snuggle up as close as I can to you.
I feel the pounding of your heart beat.

I feel you stroke my hair.
You kiss me on the head.
I drift off to sleep in your arms,
and hear 'I love you', the last words that you said.

(A/N: Well that's it. There you go </a></font></a>I know it's not the best, but i worked hard on this. It was kinda difficult for me. I really really hope you like it. Please comment everybody^^)

renmonsta on August 13th, 2008 06:45 pm (UTC)
wo hoho..that was a long one!!!!!! and i didnt enjoy it at all *smirks*

Ahahahahah...kidding babe!! MIllions of thank yous..but you know what? i thought you had gone to sleep or something..because it took you soo long because the poem is really long..wahahaha...
*hugs* for posting a poem to a stranger wahahahah.....

what else? what else? it was really nice..and i am saving this one as well...oh yeah baby~!
thx once again^^
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
haha. your welcome. Sorry about the author's note though. It screwed up.
It's was supposed to say your name. I don't really know what happened.
Anyway, thx for reading it, and liking it.^^
renmonsta on August 13th, 2008 06:51 pm (UTC)
not a problem!!!!

i am happy that i enjoyed it tooo!!!!!!!!!! ahhahaha

and why wouldnt i like it? i LOVED it man!!!!

thanks again!!!~
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 06:54 pm (UTC)
yay.. hahah..
i'm such a dork!^^
renmonsta on August 13th, 2008 06:55 pm (UTC)
you are indeed!! ^^
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 06:57 pm (UTC)
i know
clocktowers don't tell timetftcproductions on August 13th, 2008 08:36 pm (UTC)
umma... r u a poet now? 4 sizzle. This is really good. -.-* i envy u a lot *runs under a rock*
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 08:51 pm (UTC)
i'm not a poet. And don't say that su, your writing is a whole lot better than mine.
*kicks rock you hi dunder*
Kazno_doppleganger on August 13th, 2008 09:46 pm (UTC)
*revives self*

That . . . was so pretty. And smutty. An amazing pretty smutty-ness.

I wish I could make words flow like this. -sigh-

This was really great. ^ ^ thank you so much!
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 09:54 pm (UTC)
I read some of your fics and you are a really good writer. Your smut is a lot better than mine. And thank you so much for commenting^^
jongjin_jaeho on August 13th, 2008 10:33 pm (UTC)
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 10:41 pm (UTC)
Yay. thank you!
Love you toooooo
Thanks for commenting^^
kattan69kattan69 on August 13th, 2008 10:59 pm (UTC)
Damn...this is so good....and it is a smut poem. You've got all the basics there and it flows so smoothly. Congrats on a well job done! Bravo!
kattan69kattan69 on August 13th, 2008 11:00 pm (UTC)
What am I thinking...I meant on a job well done!
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 13th, 2008 11:02 pm (UTC)
Lol, thank you so much for your compliments.
Thanks for commenting^^
~♥Hope to the End. Always Keep the Faith♥~chloe1910 on August 14th, 2008 01:54 am (UTC)
woah..this is nice...
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 14th, 2008 11:46 pm (UTC)
Thank you
Thanks for commenting^^
ara_nieyara_niey on August 14th, 2008 02:50 am (UTC)
a smut poem~
even a poem can be this hot~*smirk*
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 14th, 2008 11:47 pm (UTC)
yes yes. Thank you
Thanks for commenting^^
~Unconditional Love~: make lovejakiwumi on August 14th, 2008 03:45 am (UTC)
wow...that was one of the longest poems i read so far.....

don't turn ppl on like that ok??? :P
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 14th, 2008 11:48 pm (UTC)
OK I won't. Lol.
Thanks for commenting^^
irerd_tagairerd_taga on August 15th, 2008 01:05 am (UTC)
This looks like an epic poem to me, an epic smutty poem! LOL!
Good one!
jaejaelover33jaejaelover33 on August 16th, 2008 05:27 am (UTC)
haha. thanks
thanks for commenting^^
alluringalialluringali on February 10th, 2009 04:30 pm (UTC)
I love smut, ha ha ha!!! I am always entertained by your work, but this was my fav, of course because it came from deep inside of a place that you were willing share with all of us. Thanks for that, keep it coming!!!I know that sometimes things like this can be a bit scary to post, but I always post everything and do not care if no one likes it. If it comes from within you, it is always a winner in my eyes. :)